15 November 2008 @ 08:45 pm
Trigger  
Title : Trigger Chapter 8
Pairing : RyoUchi
Rating : PG-15
Genre : Crime, drama
Summary: Nishikido Ryo was a disillusioned investigator in the Tokyo Major Crimes Division, filled with self-hatred and regret for not being able to save his sister. Uchi Hiroki was a journalist looking for a scoop. A macabre crime by a killer with a personal vengeance soon brings the two together.
A/N : I dun care that most of u probably forgot about the existence of this fic, I love this story. Comments still appreciated. XD

Chapter 7

Uchi Hiroki looked at the words on the computer screen, then with a grimace, hit the backspace. His article was far from the revealing exposé he had hoped it would be. He couldn’t look at Nishikido Ryo from the objective viewpoint he had hoped to maintain, but then this was the guy who had fed his obsession for years. And for a long time, he had equated scoring an interview with him to the Holy Grail of interviews, the one to land him on the front page. Who knew he would find his conscience in the process? As Yokoyama would say, serve him right. He probably deserved this, he had wanted to make use of Nishikido Ryo and now all he could come up with was this lackluster, totally uninspiring piece. If he was lucky, he would still have a job after this.


In the bathroom, he let his mind wander as he washed his hair. He was about to reach for his towel when the lights flickered and the whole bathroom was doused in darkness. He thought that the building must be having one of its monthly electricity meltdowns. The faucet was still dripping and he could hear the pipes churning overhead. Odd, he could hear his neighbor going about his usual business upstairs, voices rising and falling. He couldn’t really see in the dark, but he reached his hand out, coming into contact with the tiled wall. There was a little niggling uneasiness settling inside him, after all he had written about too much crime and murder to not know this seemed like the perfect setting for a burglary gone wrong. He thought he heard footsteps, muffled by the ratty carpet; as the darkness held its breath around him. The sound got nearer and nearer, the scuffling of boots in a slow, measured way, and then they stopped. Like the person on the other side of the room was listening, gauging. Fear reverberated in him like the hum of a vibrating fork. And he waited, waited for the doorknob to rattle, waited for the door to open, all the time thinking it was maybe his own flustered imagination. He didn’t know how long he stood there, but when the lights came on, he had to blink several times to readjust to the brightness.


He opened the door and looked at his apartment, nothing looked disturbed, and everything looked relatively untouched. The only thing that could be of interest to a burglar was his laptop and the stark white screen stared back at him. He was beginning to think it was a false scare when he saw his bed, the bedsheets neatly turned down the way they were, when he realized the intruder wasn’t a burglar at all. And the only thing he wanted from him was his fear.

--

Nishikido Ryo stepped into the night wind, he needed cigarettes. Or a rush of caffeine to help him make it through the night. He also needed to forget about Uchi Hiroki’s little impromptu visit and the discomforting feeling that Uchi Hiroki was quietly coming to his own conclusion about him. He had worked fine in the last two years, cornered off in his own world of maddening silence and memories. And he had realized that nothing screamed louder than that silence, and that void of empty space murder left behind. There was no finality, no acceptance and no deliverance from the endless self-questioning. In his mind, he had rebuilt so many hypothetical situations, all of them with a better ending than this. One of the scenarios that appeared most often in his mind was that he wasn’t a cop, because he would rather keep his own sister safe than have that badge pinned onto his chest and do such a successful job at keeping all the criminals locked up. The criminals had found him anyway.


On the way to the kombini, he had hitched a ride with a patrol officer on duty working the midnight shift. The car cruised smoothly along the deserted roads, and Ryo wondered whether there were actually people who voluntarily worked the night shift. He did it only because he had no one waiting for him at home, no one who would worry if he didn’t return. The slight drizzle slicked over the windshield, and maybe he stayed overnight because he liked being alone. After being reminded on a daily basis of the perversity people could be capable of, he found loneliness the safest of all.


Suddenly the walkie-talkie crackled over the stagnant silence, and he could hear the operator calling for a vehicle in the vicinity, talking about needing a unit to investigate a break-in. He wasn’t overly concerned, until he heard the address being rattled. The address he had committed to memory that night he was driving aimlessly around the city centre looking for escape. Uchi’s address.


--


He could tell Uchi Hiroki was surprised when he saw him there. Being caught offguard in a moment of vulnerability probably wasn’t part of Uchi Hiroki’s plans. Ryo thought he looked like a fresh college student in his old faded tee and pants. His hair was still damp, with a towel draped around his shoulders. He had looked at the police officer, before his glance settled on Ryo.


“I didn’t realize Detectives investigate break-ins too.” There was none of that defiance and hostility Ryo was expecting, just a slightly tired expression before he tugged on the corner of the towel, like a little habit of comfort.


“What did the burglar take?” The accompanying officer asked and Uchi Hiroki stepped aside, revealing the open hallway to his bedroom. Now, his hands were gripping the towel, bunching it around him as if it was something holding him together.


“It wasn’t a burglary. I just didn’t know what else to call that.” Uchi gestured towards the bedroom, his head slightly averted as though he didn’t want to set his eyes on it again. And there was a vicious blotch bleeding and staining the white bed sheets red.


Uchi sat on the couch, arms wrapped around his knees before Ryo heard his soft voice.


“You don’t really think that’s blood do you?”


“We’ll have to take it back to the lab. Who has keys to your apartment?”


Uchi faltered for a moment before he replied.


“The landlord. I changed my lock a few months ago.” Uchi looked over at the bedroom where the police officer was taking preliminary photos of the scene.


“God, tell me it’s a sick vicious joke.” There was a flare of anger in Uchi’s eyes as he directed his gaze towards Ryo.


“Lots of things start out this way, as sick vicious jokes. And quite frankly I wish I didn’t see you at every crime scene I’m going to.”


Uchi stayed quiet. As Yoko would say, serve him right for choosing to get embroiled with Nishikido Ryo.

--

Two streets away, a man took off his gloves, after he tossed the bucket into a back street garbage dump. It was close but worth it. Pity he couldn’t actually see Uchi Hiroko’s face. Because Uchi Hiroki was getting too close to the truth and he couldn’t have people digging too near the murder two years ago. He needed things to stay the way they are, and this was just a small warning. And if this didn’t work, there’s always more.
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gutless glutton[info]diac on November 15th, 2008 01:47 pm (UTC)
you scared me...I loved the bathroom scene it's like classical horror movie really scary with the way you describe Uchi's emotions. Blood on Uchi's bed aaaaaaaa poor Ryo will have to stay overnight...for protection, right? XDD

Somehow I managed not to comment to the previous chapter. The beginning is very beautifully written from nightmare to nightmare LOVE IT and the description of the park - very nice one.

It’s soooo nice to see your updates, princess chuchuchuuuu I hope you will write more <3333
ash: Ryo // propping his head[info]ashesof_hope on November 15th, 2008 01:54 pm (UTC)
There's only one thing in ur head! XDDD Ahem, what, I totally didn't plan on that. *shifty eyes* XDD You probably forgot to comment. Funny u're commenting in batch now. Urgh, I hope I write more. I'm losing confidence in my writing DDD:
gutless glutton[info]diac on November 15th, 2008 02:05 pm (UTC)
*hides* but these shifty eyes give me hoooope XDDDDD

please please write more!!! and stop with bullshit abt your writing skills! you are one of the best and I'm never gonna be tired to remind you that. <33333
ash: Ryouchi // excite[info]ashkt on November 15th, 2008 03:37 pm (UTC)
ahaha u're scolding me! Boooo again. One of the best? What u mean I'm not the best? XDDDD

Oh but I intend it to be in a hotel room bcos Ryo thinks Uchi's place lacks proper security.

Uchi closed his eyes, and he tried to ignore Ryo sitting on the bed, right beside him, propped up against the pillows. The tv program was set on mute and the room was bathed in the lights from the television set. He hated how vulnerable he was just now, hated how he who had always written about crime scene, was now almost part of one himself. He didn't like the exchanging of roles, didn't like the thought that somewhere out there, someone had planned this, with him as the intended victim. And most of all, he didn't like how grateful he was for Nishikido Ryo's company and protection.

And unconsciously he rubbed his hand against the front of his pants. Maybe he just needed some diversion, he could do this quietly. Nishikido Ryo looked as though he was lost in another world. He once heard someone say they could only face the memories of their past through the bottom of a Scotch glass. Maybe that was true for Ryo too, because he looked like an apparition barely tethered there by the force of his willpower.

His hands moved idly, fingers stroking but his mind kept going back, going back to that bedroom with the stink of blood. It was blood alright. He could recognise that coppery stench, that aftermath of violence anywhere.

He let out a soft moan, muffled by the pillow when he felt the pleasure building up. Then he heard Ryo's voice.

"Uchi go to sleep."

Uchi flung the blanket aside and frankly he was quite upset at Ryo for having deprived him of his only escape.

"I can't alright. How do you sleep after all those murders?"

There was a length pause, and Ryo switched off the tv before he flung the remote control onto the table. The sudden silence seemed to indicate the prelude to something else. Something frightening that Uchi didn't want to be a part of. He knew what was coming, and he could deal with Nishikido if he was a waif of a ghost, if he was bitter and hell-bent on revenge. But he couldn't deal with his tenderness.

"I don't." Ryo replied, his voice a lover's caress, as he wrapped his arms around Uchi's waist, holding his wrists prisoner in his hands.

Hahaha. Inspiration struck. XDDD
gutless glutton[info]diac on November 15th, 2008 03:43 pm (UTC)
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa YOU ARE SOMETHING!

and yes you are the best ...it's just that Ana is the best two. So you are my gloden pair <3333333333333

OMGOMGOMG I WANT THEM TO HAVE SEEEX


"I can't alright. How do you sleep after all those murders?"

There was a length pause, and Ryo switched off the tv before he flung the remote control onto the table. The sudden silence seemed to indicate the prelude to something else. Something frightening that Uchi didn't want to be a part of. He knew what was coming, and he could deal with Nishikido if he was a waif of a ghost, if he was bitter and hell-bent on revenge. But he couldn't deal with his tenderness.

"I don't."
THIS PART IS PERFECT
ash: Stock // emo girl[info]ashkt on November 15th, 2008 03:46 pm (UTC)
lol that was totally impromptu. I can't argue with that cos I love Ana's writing too. DDD: And she's way more original than I am.

Ok glad to get ur approval. Looks like the next chapter will be easy since I just about wrote 25% of it here. XDDDD
puppy in the box: ryox4[info]fayevalentine3 on November 15th, 2008 09:43 pm (UTC)
This day is too good to be true! :)

I never forget about Trigger. Ever. I'm just so happy you updated! *O*

I loved the inversion of roles and I loved all the suspense in the bathroom scene. My heart was racing as if I was there myself! Scary... I love it. I can't wait for more... can't wait to know what Uchi is close to find out that is making the criminal so nervous... and I don't know if that reply to a comment above is going to be included in the next chapter but... I can't wait to read how they're going to spend the rest of the night... since both are unable to sleep! XDDD

Ahhh. What a great day this was. Uchi + Ordinary + Trigger. I feel spoiled. <333


Edited at 2008-11-15 09:44 pm (UTC)
ash: KamePi // endless days[info]ashkt on November 17th, 2008 11:18 am (UTC)
:))) Oh u read the comment. XDDD I do plan to put that in the next chapter, I just haven't figured out what comes after that. Sex or sleeping. XDDD And yeap Ordinary is all kinds of wonderful really. Thanks for not forgetting this fic.
ravilolikenshin[info]ravilolikenshin on November 15th, 2008 10:25 pm (UTC)
HELL NO I didn't forget! I'm so excited you updated! This chapter was really creepy o.o

I look forward to more!
ash: Kame // in the dark; nowhere to run[info]ashkt on November 17th, 2008 11:18 am (UTC)
lol it was supposed to be creepy in a way. Thanks for reading :))
アレット: 亮内: Escaping reality[info]blufox_o7 on November 16th, 2008 12:12 am (UTC)
You.. you updated. Omg. You updated. Everybody's being nice this week. Maybe they're preparing me for the next weeks of terror -.-

BUT DANG. I... I can't get enough of this.

Best line for this chap: "And quite frankly I wish I didn’t see you at every crime scene I’m going to."

Update sooonnnnnn ♥
ash: RnK // TaiShii[info]ashkt on November 17th, 2008 11:19 am (UTC)
hope the next few weeks of terror aren't so bad for u. Thanks for commenting :)
椿 - Evergreen of life: RU → kiss me good[info]closetchild_ on November 22nd, 2008 03:58 am (UTC)
I dunno if I have ever commented before, I remember reading the first few chapters and totally loving the fic, but then I dunno what happened 'cause I only got around to read the rest now o_O;

Anyways! This fic is so so so awesome! And interesting! And captivating! And I must say, the way you write is just skfjdksfgsh I LOVE IT XD;

There are tons of things I could quote and such here, but as I just read everything since the beginning all on once I can't really remember it all, besides this comment is running long already. BUT, but.. The bathroom scene in the beginning of this was really thrilling o____o And the way the plot develops and the little bits and thoughts from the criminal and the way Ryo and Hiroki can't seem to avoid each other and how their relationship grows more and more interesting and man ♥

Damn why am I suck a sucker for all these twister R/U fics >>; must not be healthy I HOPE YOU'LL UPDATE SOON AGAIN ♥

Oh and I loved that little hotel room scene extra!! ;~;

Edited at 2008-11-22 04:05 am (UTC)
ash: Ryouchi // excite[info]ashkt on November 22nd, 2008 05:38 am (UTC)
glad u like twisted RU fics since.....I seem to like writing them. XDDD Oh...u read that hotel room snippet I wrote. I'm still figuring out what actually happens next but thank u for liking the development of the story. Oh I dun intend for Ryo & Uchi to avoid each other for very long. XDD

Thanks for commenting
椿 - Evergreen of life: RU → OTP ♥[info]closetchild_ on November 23rd, 2008 12:12 pm (UTC)
Well it's a good combination then! XD;

Oh I dun intend for Ryo & Uchi to avoid each other for very long. XDD

Well that's good to hear! :D
Can't wait to read more~! ♥

Edited at 2008-11-23 12:14 pm (UTC)
Shirls: silence[info]ironicdawn on November 23rd, 2008 04:02 pm (UTC)
I...had wanted to wait till I found a moment during the day to read this...cos I knew I would scare myself if I read it at night...^.^;;;;;;;;

Poor Uchi...that bathroom scene was really well written. The suspense was really good, and I loved the way you had that running all the way through until the scene "zooms out" at the end to the murderer's POV. I've been burgled too, and the worst thing definitely isn't the stuff being taken, it's the fear behind it - the thought that some stranger can just wander into your private personal space. I remember feeling really violated afterwards so I can see Uchi's fear in a way.

This is getting really scary</> exciting - can't wait for the next one!

ash: L word // shenny; they do not get you[info]ashkt on November 26th, 2008 02:49 pm (UTC)
but but.....I haven't started being real scary. At least that wasn't really my intention. XDDDDYep, it's scary how someone waltz into ur place and take ur stuff. Like u said, violated and knowing that ur safety is compromised? Thanks for commenting. :)
i am the legendary irresponsible hero.: [k8] pair - ryouchi v.[info]tinzedesu on November 27th, 2008 01:54 pm (UTC)
I read everything in one go (since I haven't read this fic yet :D) and found myself drowned with the story. I definitely love your story so thank you. *u* I'll be waiting for the next chapter as well. :) Keep up the great work!!
ash: Ryo // he and his girlfriend[info]ashkt on November 27th, 2008 03:24 pm (UTC)
It's so nice to know that someone read all the chapters in one swoop. And thanks to ur comment, I finally found the willpower to err...finish the rest of the chapter today. ;P
ash[info]ashkt on July 7th, 2009 01:48 pm (UTC)
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