14 July 2007 @ 09:45 pm
Trigger  
Title : Trigger Chapter 1
Pairing : RyoUchi
Rating : PG-15
Genre : Crime, angst and mindfuck
Summary: Nishikido Ryo was a disillusioned investigator in the Tokyo Major Crimes Division while Uchi Hiroki was a journalist looking for a scoop. A macabre crime soon brings the two together.
A/N : Part of this fic was written way before but somehow I wouldn't decide what Ryo's character was. Inspired by the movie '8mm' and because I'm a sucker for crime/suspense fics. And since Hana-fuda is finished so it means I can start on a new RyoUchi fic. Comments are loved.



Chapter 1

It was dark, and it smelled like mold. Nishikido Ryo liked it like this. It was fitting that his office should be decaying, considering that he was fighting a losing battle against all the corruption, all the depravities on every corner of the street outside in the real world. And he would have given up, would have handed in his badge and Glock if it wasn’t for his sister. Michiko whose life was snuffed out in that brutal way. Nobody deserved that, least of all Michiko, who was the good one, the pretty one. The one he would have given his life to protect and yet failed abysmally for all the accolades heaped on him as one of the best in the criminal division. He failed her and for the last two years he had been doing everything he could to atone for his mistakes, making sure that every criminal he caught and hauled into jail was an offering to the memories of Michiko he held so dear.

 

He settled himself into his chair, and he looked at the framed photograph of Michiko against the background of bursting flora in the middle of Spring. It was the only sentimental thing he could afford in this dimly-lit hellhole of an office, the only luxury he allowed himself because it reminded him that he used to be human. He lifted the framed photograph close as his thumb stroked idly over Michiko’s smile. Then there was a sharp rap on the door and Ryo placed the framed photograph down, on the right side of his desk, right back at the exact spot.

 

His desk was a mess, piled with files of unsolved cases people had long forgotten about and styrofoam cups of unfinished coffee but the right side was always tidy. The right side was a place only reserved for the likes of Nishikido Michiko who sat there with all the grace of a princess. No one ever touched that picture. The last rookie who did, was transferred to another county and Ryo didn’t even have to say a single word. In the Tokyo Major Crime Division, Nishikido Ryo’s word was the law, the bible, the rule that everyone adhered to. He had once handed in his resignation letter and in that single day alone, the Investigations Commander and Chief made four trips to that small, dingy office of Nishikido’s. Everyone was eavesdropping, and it sounded like a war inside. Shouts, accusations, placating voices and the world-weariness of men who had seen too much of what evil atrocities men could do, spurred on by rage.

 

In the end, Nishikido won, as he always did. No one really knew how they got him to stay, what bargain and terms were exchanged over that table but one thing they realized was that Nishikido was staying, even if it meant they had to sacrifice a brash, cocky rookie. Or two.

 

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Uchi Hiroki steepled his fingers at his chin, poring over the stack of files in front of him. The whole room had the smell of aged papers, cigarette smoke and stale coffee. The tables with folders piled haphazardly on them made the cramped confines of the office look like a war-torn zone. Not pretty, but it was home. Or as close to it as anything was going to get.

 

Sitting opposite him with all the lazy countenance of a journalist without any major scoop in two months and scraping by on meager wages was Yokoyama Yu. Yoko drew in the cigarette smoke with a hiss of pleasure. Uchi didn’t smoke. He figured with the number of smokers surrounding him, he was going to die of lung cancer one day so why bother? Besides he could save the money and take pleasure in inhaling the second-hand smoke.

 

Uchi had learnt to thrive on small comforts. Being a journalist of a small publishing agency wasn’t exactly what he had in mind when he told his mother he was leaving Kamakura for Tokyo to make it big. Well he was still trying, because it was mighty hard when your interview subjects were limited to another old lady living past the age of hundred or reporting on the latest onsen hotspot. He needed a scoop, and fast. Not just any scoop, but an exclusive, mind-blowing one. Something that would scream at you from bolded headlines on the front page, something that was going to grab everyone’s attention and seize the country by storm.

 

The problem was where was he going to find such a  piece?

 

“God Yoko turn up the heater will you?” He grumbled absent-mindedly as he looked through the old archives of newspapers, paying special attention to the headlines. There was a  grunt from Yoko.

 

“Electricity costs, Uchi. Why don’t you just put your hands around the cup of coffee on your table?” Yoko continued puffing on his cigarette, seemingly on a crusade to end his life early.

 

Uchi placed one palm around the mug of coffee. The coffee had long gone lukewarm and it looked like tar. It probably only tasted slightly better, and Uchi shot a dirty look at Yoko who shrugged negligently and Uchi had to resist the urge to tell Yoko to shove his whole stash of cigarettes up his ass.

 

Uchi sniffed as he rubbed the back of his hand across his runny nose. There was no use complaining. He could bitch about it all he wanted and the office would still be doing their best to conserve electricity. Get a scoop, Yoko would say. Get a scoop and you can have all the heat you want.

 

Uchi had to bite back on the remark that once he got his scoop, Yoko could have the lousy heaters in this stinking office to himself. He was uprooting and moving to the greener pastures of the big publishing houses. He propped his head on his hand, his eyelids getting heavier before he saw a grainy picture of a man, shielding his face from the glare of the intrusive cameras. Dark cassock eyes that matched the ebony black of the coat billowing around him. This story had been all the rage two years ago. Everybody loved a hero but what the public loved more, was a fallen, tortured hero. And if there was any fitting candidate for that title, Nishikido Ryo, leading investigator of Tokyo Major Crime Division was the one.

 

And back in the labyrinthian corridors in the Tokyo Major Crime Unit, Uchi Hiroki’s wish was about to come true as the postman entered Nishikido Ryo’s office, with a bulky envelop in his hand.

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Maybe Joleisa: YAY![info]kamexkame on July 14th, 2007 09:02 pm (UTC)
LOVE
I love the atmosphere! I love the smarts! I love the characters (Marry me Yoko! And of course you don't need to turn the heating up, baby. You're hot!1 Ryo, you can be my bitch lover if you insist. Uchi I'll pretend to ignore how super you are because the Kame in RyoKame is going to be pouting like whoa otherwise).

I UBERLOVE YOUR WRITING ASH. <3 <3 <3 <3
ash: Sexual frustration[info]ashesof_hope on July 15th, 2007 10:31 am (UTC)
Re: LOVE
I UBERLOVE YOU TOO.

Sorry. Ryo is my bitch resident hawt geek so I'm afraid u have to settle for WalkingSexAnatomy!Jin. And Yoko. YOKO IS ♥
gutless glutton[info]diac on July 16th, 2007 05:32 am (UTC)
Why did Ryo handle resignation letter? What happened to his sister? A letter? What is it? New terrible crime somehow connected with his sister death?
AAAAAA!!!!
This-" Crime, angst and mindfuck" gives me shivers!!! I need to know what will happen next!
I love your RyoUchi in your other fics so I love them here in advance XDD Can't wait for another update!
ash: Uchi // my princess[info]ashesof_hope on July 16th, 2007 10:29 am (UTC)
*LOL* Why u're asking all the questions I hope no one will ask. And I would tell u that normally my mindfuck fics aren't well-received. )); Maybe it's too dark or something. XDD Why is an Akame fan reading my RyoUchi fics?

His sister didn't kill of natural causes. So basically her death was connected to a crime, and yeah the thing in the envelop is somewhat related to his sister's death two years ago. Shit I think I said too much. Oh well. Glad u love them in advance. <3
gutless glutton[info]diac on July 16th, 2007 10:50 am (UTC)
I 'm afraid to think what will be your opinion about me after I tell you this but still, I will.XD
I LOVE ALL YOUR FICS WITHOUT ANY EXСEPTION!
I 'm madly in love with Diabolos and Hana Fuda!
And by the way I'm also passionate RyoKame fan! XD
Seriously I fall in love with the talent and style of the writers and I can accept every pair they choose. And you are one of my favorites as I think I have told you already many many times. <3333

IT IS CONNECTED WITH HIS SISTER DEATH!!!REVENGE!!!!!
ash: Ryo // hot sex with tie[info]ashkt on July 16th, 2007 11:08 am (UTC)
Awww. You are really sweet. I know u are a passionate RyoKame fan. We both love Ana's fics dun we?

And thank u for liking Diabolos & Hana-fuda. They're actually my fave fics but somehow not many pple like them. XDDD And haha I'll never get sick of hearing stuff like u're one of my fave writers. WHAT. STOP GUESSING. I got this feeling before I even come out with the next chapter, u'll be listing out all the possible plot.
gutless glutton[info]diac on July 16th, 2007 11:22 am (UTC)
We do love Ana's fics. A LOT. I think it's impossible not to love them. 69!!!!!!!!!

By the way is there any hope for Diabolos continuation? There is still no Uchi there ..and I'm still hoping ..that someday..I'd be very happy, very very happy (this is the gentlest poke ever XDD)

NO GUESSING! I'M PATIANTLY AND SILENTLY WAITING FOR UPDATE XDDDDD <3


ash: Ryo // smile[info]ashkt on July 16th, 2007 11:58 am (UTC)
OBVIOUSLY U ARE ALREDI SPOILT. But yeah, Diabolos is very very hard to write, because everytime I finish, I end up very drained. But my friend has been poking me to write the next chapter so I'll see what I can do k?

PATIENTLY MY ARSE. XDDDD
gutless glutton[info]diac on July 16th, 2007 12:22 pm (UTC)
XDDDDDDDDDDDDD
I'm just getting used to your kindness, not spoiled no no no XDDDDDD

mmmm I'm trying to be patient, but it's soooooo hard XDDDD

you are giving me little hope for Diabolos! HURRAAH!!! XDDDD

it's so nice to chat with you like that. I'm really glad. <3
ash: ohkura is da smex[info]ashesof_hope on July 16th, 2007 01:16 pm (UTC)
Haha. I think some pple will say I'm not a very nice person but yeah, I'll definitely try cos Diabolos is my fave. Nice to chat to u too. :Dv
oldricecooker: RyoUchi - Mine[info]oldricecooker on July 18th, 2007 12:27 pm (UTC)
*comes out of my zi bi shell* overdued comment from 2 days ago.

1. I LOVE YOU FOR INCLUDING NONCHALANT GRUNTY BOSS YOKO ♥
2. He figured with the number of smokers surrounding him, he was going to die of lung cancer one day so why bother? Besides he could save the money and take pleasure in inhaling the second-hand smoke. -- i thought this idea was kinda smart ^^
3. ryo is an obsessed oniichan.
but since her death was due to his inability to save her, i think all that guilt and hatred he is hanging on to is probably not for her anymore, but a sort of symbolism of repentance for his own mistake. and this hate has made him ki siao and taking it out on other people. :(
4. scheming desperate uchi is greatness :DDD
5. like always, your fics has taken on the formula of two people being placed in positions that will force them to hurt each other, but cannot help being attracted to each other ♥
ash: Uchi // my princess[info]ashesof_hope on July 18th, 2007 05:10 pm (UTC)
your fics has taken on the formula of two people being placed in positions that will force them to hurt each other, but cannot help being attracted to each other ♥

You prob are sick of my themes alredi. Obviously I'm always using the same method over and over again. XDD But yeah I love Yoko being that sarcastic boss who grunts and chain-smokes. Somehow it seems realistic. LOL

And yes I do love scheming journalist Uchi because frankly I got tired of portraying him as an uke. He's going to be going after Ryo for info for his big scoop and he isn't going to stop at anything. Hey he just may seduce Ryo if he needs to. XDD

Yeah thanks for commenting. It's been so long since I actually see u comment. Next time I wun force u to read anymore. No worries. XP
Bel: OT3[info]belinder on August 9th, 2007 05:19 am (UTC)
Wow, please forgive me for not commenting in like forever. And blame all the dramas that are coming out T_T. So sorry, I forgot what I was missing.

I love the premise for this story and the randomness of Yoko thrown in there.

BULKY PACKAGE OF DOOM! Oh noes. Hopefully it isn't anything TOO dangerous/life changing...I mean that in the sense that Ryo stays alive.

I can't really ask for sane, because you write these characters and they work so I'm not going to ask for a change when it works.

And I'm still loving your descriptions.
His desk was a mess, piled with files of unsolved cases people had long forgotten about and styrofoam cups of unfinished coffee but the right side was always tidy. The right side was a place only reserved for the likes of Nishikido Michiko who sat there with all the grace of a princess. No one ever touched that picture.
=D
ash: Ando Masanobu // hot[info]ashesof_hope on August 9th, 2007 02:18 pm (UTC)
I can't really ask for sane

I have difficulty trying to decipher whether that's a compliment or whatever but well, thank u. ♥ I love Yoko being a grouchy, grumpy boss. He's just so suited for that I guess. And well Ryo is gonna stay alive. As much as I adore angst, I dun like snuffing out my character's life. ;)
Bel[info]belinder on August 10th, 2007 05:59 am (UTC)
Heheh sorry. I just read it over now, and it's even hard for me to understand what I meant there.

It was refering to Ryo and his characterization. I just don't want him to go crazy...or something. IDEK *cries*, haha it's way too late and I've been working way too much to form coherent thoughts this late.

Yay, alive Ryo is good :D